diff --git a/src/app/page.tsx b/src/app/page.tsx
index a7222cc..1c88091 100644
--- a/src/app/page.tsx
+++ b/src/app/page.tsx
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ export default function IndexPage() {
               <span className="hero-gradient-text">Loyal Customer</span>
             </h1>
             <p className="text-[#4f463a] hero-description text-sm sm:text-base md:text-lg xl:text-xl mb-8 leading-relaxed max-w-2xl select-none">
-              Loyaly.ai turns everyday digital engagement into real world shopping rewards — customers earn coins through games and daily activities, then redeem them at offline stores near them.
+              Loyaly.ai turns everyday digital engagement into real world shopping rewards. Customers earn coins through games and daily activities, then redeem them at offline stores near them.
             </p>
             <div className="flex flex-wrap gap-5">
               <Link href="/contacts" className="flex items-center gap-3 bg-[#f4be28] hover:bg-[#ffd95a] hero-btn-primary text-[#171512] px-8 py-4 rounded-xl font-bold text-base md:text-lg transition-all duration-300 shadow-lg shadow-yellow-500/30 hover:shadow-yellow-500/50 hover:scale-[1.02] cursor-pointer no-underline">
diff --git a/src/components/home/ProblemsShift.tsx b/src/components/home/ProblemsShift.tsx
index 76c691c..5cf6854 100644
--- a/src/components/home/ProblemsShift.tsx
+++ b/src/components/home/ProblemsShift.tsx
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ export default function ProblemsShift({ isLoaded = true }: ProblemsShiftProps) {
           Retail is busy.<br /><span style={{ color: '#f4be28' }}>But blind.</span>
         </h2>
         <p className="ps-subtitle" style={{ color: '#4f463a', fontSize: 'clamp(1rem, 1.3vw, 1.2rem)', fontWeight: 500, maxWidth: 620, margin: '0 auto', lineHeight: 1.7, fontFamily: 'Sora, sans-serif' }}>
-          Customers have no compelling reason to choose your store over the next one. Loyaly creates that reason — with daily rewards, interactive games, and surprise coupons redeemable in person.
+          Customers have no compelling reason to choose your store over the next one. Loyaly creates that reason, with daily rewards, interactive games, and surprise coupons redeemable in person.
         </p>
       </div>
 
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ export default function ProblemsShift({ isLoaded = true }: ProblemsShiftProps) {
         <CompareCard
           variant="shift"
           badge="The Shift"
-          desc="Loyaly bridges digital engagement and offline shopping — customers earn coins and coupons through fun activities, then walk into nearby stores to redeem them in person."
+          desc="Loyaly bridges digital engagement and offline shopping. Customers earn coins and coupons through fun activities, then walk into nearby stores to redeem them in person."
           items={SHIFT_ITEMS}
           image="/Problems+shift/Shift.png"
           imageAlt="In-store intelligence shift"
diff --git a/src/components/home/ProductsSection.tsx b/src/components/home/ProductsSection.tsx
index 7a9a702..a2d6596 100644
--- a/src/components/home/ProductsSection.tsx
+++ b/src/components/home/ProductsSection.tsx
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ const PRODUCTS: Product[] = [
     title: 'Behavision',
     subtitle: 'AI Powered Footfall Analytics',
     description:
-      'AI powered footfall analytics and behavioral intelligence. Understand how customers move, dwell, and engage — turning raw foot traffic into rich, actionable insights.',
+      'AI powered footfall analytics and behavioral intelligence. Understand how customers move, dwell, and engage, turning raw foot traffic into rich, actionable insights.',
     accent: '#f4be28',
     accentRgb: '244, 190, 40',
     tags: ['Footfall Tracking', 'Heatmaps', 'Behavior Analysis'],
diff --git a/src/components/home/TheLoop.tsx b/src/components/home/TheLoop.tsx
index c95b9a8..cf1f446 100644
--- a/src/components/home/TheLoop.tsx
+++ b/src/components/home/TheLoop.tsx
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ interface Step {
 
 const STEPS: Step[] = [
   { step: '01', id: 'earn',   title: 'Earn Online',     desc: 'Daily login, 5,000-step walking challenges, and interactive games like Maze and Spin Wheel earn Loyaly Coins and unlock surprise coupons.' },
-  { step: '02', id: 'engage', title: 'Unlock Deals',    desc: 'Merchants create game-based discount campaigns — customers play once to reveal their exclusive reward on a specific product.' },
+  { step: '02', id: 'engage', title: 'Unlock Deals',    desc: 'Merchants create game based discount campaigns: customers play once to reveal their exclusive reward on a specific product.' },
   { step: '03', id: 'spend',  title: 'Discover & Visit', desc: 'Browse participating stores nearby, view active game campaigns and coin-earning offers, then walk in and shop in person.' },
-  { step: '04', id: 'repeat', title: 'Redeem & Repeat', desc: 'Use Loyaly Coins and coupons at checkout to save money — then come back tomorrow to earn more and keep the loop going.' },
+  { step: '04', id: 'repeat', title: 'Redeem & Repeat', desc: 'Use Loyaly Coins and coupons at checkout to save money, then come back tomorrow to earn more and keep the loop going.' },
 ];
 
 const IMPACTS = [
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ export default function TheLoop() {
           color: 'rgba(255,255,255,0.42)', lineHeight: 1.8,
           fontFamily: 'Sora, sans-serif',
         }}>
-          Earn coins online, unlock game-based deals, discover nearby stores, and redeem offline — a self-reinforcing loop that keeps customers engaged and drives repeat footfall.
+          Earn coins online, unlock game based deals, discover nearby stores, and redeem offline: a self reinforcing loop that keeps customers engaged and drives repeat footfall.
         </p>
       </div>